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My first ever street submission based on a concept I was looking forward to achieve and to deliver to DA, I hope you will like it.

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Comments and critiques are most welcome

Critiques


:iconstamatisgr:
We all know that it's quite difficult to compose a street shot because the moment we want to catch lasts only for a single unique moment! :lol:
You did great in this picture! The blurred pigeon in the foreground leads my eyes to your main subject which is crystal clear focused on the right. It tells me the story of a man who probably holds a bucket of bird food and makes me imagine a hundred of pigeons surrounding him. I can almost hear them flapping their wings and this is due to the flying pigeon just in front of my eyes!
Your B/W edit is also very good with rich blacks and whites which make a B/W picture look more alive than a colored one!
All in all a wonderful street shot which makes me ask you for more!
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:iconstamatisgr:
I hope you do more street :)

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:icon50500:
this is wonderful,, i love it so much :clap:

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:icondavincipoppalag:
You're gonna be good at street Yousef! This is good!

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:iconlampman:
too much vignetting in the top left, apart from that i like it.

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:iconinobras:
Wonderful shot! :clap:
:iconarthatesme:
Great depth field!

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:iconyoshimetal:
I will try my friend, I don't have much experience doing it tho, besides as you can see here I didn't get much views/comments of this pic as my watchers are not used for such style.
:iconyoshimetal:
Thanks Salma, I'm glad that you liked it :hug:
:iconyoshimetal:
Thanks Dave for your continuous support.

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July 6, 2009
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109 KB
900×598

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Camera Data

NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
1/640 second
F/1.8
50 mm
200
Nov 9, 2007, 12:32:20 PM

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