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Follow the Leader

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I'd like to dedicate this work to the recent peace approach for the Middle East and to everyone who's longing for peace. :peace:

All guns should be knotted like the one in front of the UN building.
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3ds Max 2011 | Mental Ray | about 4 hours of work and 6.30 hours for rendereing | Photoshop CS4
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Hi Yoshi!
Nice work at 1st, you know I am not a veteran 3d artist but I can tell you what I think needs improving..
1st problem is the bricks texture, the ceiling and floor texture looks like a wall texture not ceiling/floor.. also the repeat count is low and so the bricks looks very big and it gets pixellated, you need to raise the repeat count for texture..
On the far wall there is a painting and it is stretched horizontally.. I think you need to research for uv mapping/ texture projection..
As for the light, it gets too bright and washes away details on the right, I don't know the setting you are using but it doesn't look convincing to me.. for example, the wall on the right looks either punctured or there are circular lights there, but the rest of the scene does not convey either cases.. except for reflections on bullets..
I wish you good luck in ur journey to 3d graphics, I am also trying to improve myself in this field.. I hope I gave you some useful advice.
Peace my friend!